Confrence meeting

I went to my teacher office to tell me how is my essay, and how can i fix it in the future. Actually i did not have big mistakes as my teacher said, but i have several things that i should work on it. For example, my third paragraph was complex to understand becausec i was explain about my feelings and my way to talk. Which that was difficult to understand. I will try to work hard in my essay's and make it more understandable. Also i think in the end of class i will have more experince and many methods in writing.